areas+to+improve

every piece of work have their ups and their downs, so i chose the same pieces of work that I chose from the straingths page. this piece of work is good.it has all the things write but it is very desorganised.the numbers are very bad shaped.

As i mencioned on the strengths page it was a test. it is good but i got a verry importanat mistake on it. it was that i put the symbol where it didnt go.

this was a speech that i neede to say infront of the class. if is great but, when i gave the speech i did not look at my class mates i just read the paper with no entonation, so it made it boring.

what I feel i coould do better in this piece of rork is the visual atractive of this piece of work. My letter is horrible (as you can see) so it maked it look simply bad.